several changes are underway to the story. I want to make Mr Birbie a judge who in the beginning is in court and serves a sentence on a man who is begging for him not to. Later we realize that many of his cases have been bought off. I also want to introduce the element of time. That mr birbie thinks everything is a waste of time. He is always in a hurry. when he dies he learns that he has wasted his time.

whew! finally getting back on track! I been working with this script so long it feels like I'm going in circles. This last week I've really made alot of progress in terms of story. I have a revised script that will be posted. Alot of details have changed but the backbone has remained the same.

These are the intro shots I'm working on If you scroll down the page I've included the revised script this week.

Prior to this development I had wanted to enter in several animations into my portfolio. I had wanted to major in live action(film) and minor in animation. I now realize I will not have the time to create these extra animations so I pulled my idea of Bus 8 into the class. I have been writing this script on my own the last couple of weeks and decided this is the way I should go to get this story up on its feet. This script is for a ten minute short. I intend to follow up with the storyboard. let me know what you think!

This is the second page of the story board.