Tuesday, February 8, 2011

My main accomplishment this week has been in the story. After talking with a few people about the storyline I have decided to make the story focused on the oilcan instead of a story about jobs and policies. I have decided through the help of (Tyler M) to show how being yourself is the best way to accomplish your goals . In the beginning of the story he will try to move up the ranks by trying to outdo himself by trying to oil too many machines at once. After failing he will learn to use his gifts (an oil spout specially made to reach hard spots and his intelligence) to succeed.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Glad you talked with Tyler! The nice part about the "be yourself" story is that it is an established plot. There have been lots of different "takes" on it (including Tyler's!). Make sure to include a visual each week! (Maybe you and Tyler sketch-jammed while you talked--I can't imagine Tyler not sketching while talking story).